And All Things Will End

Written by TheCharredScribe / R: Restricted - Adult / 8.50 (4 ratings) (4)
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RamenJack
RamenJack		 Dec 28, 2019
Had the urge to go searching for CYOA content this weekend, which led to this website, and then, this story. Signed up for this site to write this comment!

I really enjoyed this story and could tell early on that the writing was of good quality. The setting and flow were strong, and the body horror, gore, and unreliable narrative passages worked well. I’ve only gone through it once but it felt like a complete experience.

Keep up the good work — I see that this is your first posting but I’m looking forward to what’s next! :)
by RamenJack on Dec 28, 2019
EndMaster
EndMaster		 Nov 4, 2019
by EndMaster on Nov 4, 2019
Camelon
Camelon		 Nov 4, 2019
The mood of this story is unique - very creepy. There definitely is a tension between what is real, what is not, and the story has a lot of unexpected turns and twists. It's pretty dark, violent, and surreal. There were some cool crazy word image effects in various places.
by Camelon on Nov 4, 2019
Solskin
Solskin		 Nov 3, 2019
by Solskin on Nov 3, 2019

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