Hollywood or Bust

Written by sansevieria / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 5.00 (7 ratings) (7)
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Artazansss
Artazansss		 Nov 1, 2011
by Artazansss on Nov 1, 2011
KingMalice
KingMalice		 May 26, 2010
by KingMalice on May 26, 2010
Marshmello
Marshmello		 Mar 18, 2006
by Marshmello on Mar 18, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Dec 18, 2005
You can't spell (the fact that <b>I</b> am complaining about this says a lot) and your plot line is severely lacking. Having read this, my nuts actualy hurt.
by donteatpoop on Dec 18, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Dec 11, 2005
You gave yourself a 10.

Why?

Do you actually think it's good?

Are you that fucking stupid?

I mean, if you were DEP and your story was actually worthy of a 10 you might be able to get away with it. Couple THAT fact with the fact that this story is an inarticulate piece of shit...

And, well, I think you might come to understand why I gave you this 1.

Had it not been for you rating yourself a 10, I might have given you a 4.

Shame on you, sir.

Shame on you.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Dec 11, 2005
sansevieria
sansevieria		 Dec 11, 2005
by sansevieria on Dec 11, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Mar 4, 2005
That's it after like the 20th dead end I stopped reading.

Obviously, you did not read my advice for getting the hang of CYOA (see newbie forums). It distinctly says do not have too many choices per room, which is exactly what you have here. god, I'm a genius.
by jeffisthebest on Mar 4, 2005

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