The Mediator - Shadowland

Written by xANG3LA / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 5.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Jun 13, 2005
Good premise. A lot of work needs put in for grammer and maybe develope the storyline a bit more. Nice start though, has potential.
by donteatpoop on Jun 13, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Mar 4, 2005
Wow, this story jumped all over the place, it was good sometimes and horrible the next. You endings were the worst of all, you need to work on them.

It is a good idea.
by jeffisthebest on Mar 4, 2005

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