You are a PROFESSIONAL Assassin

Written by kritztheman / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Specterpoet	Oct 5, 2014	Neat storyline, but horrible spelling and punctuation. I wish I could rate it higher. by Specterpoet on Oct 5, 2014
pieman4000	Sep 4, 2009	awesome but please finish it by pieman4000 on Sep 4, 2009
pscroggs	Oct 14, 2008	It would be fun if finished by pscroggs on Oct 14, 2008
sillyruski	Jun 21, 2008	great job...wait for more! by sillyruski on Jun 21, 2008
Arthas	Jan 19, 2007	So far, so good. by Arthas on Jan 19, 2007
donteatpoop	Jun 29, 2006	Did you know that sentences begin with capitalized words? Look into it. It's a hell of an advancement for literature. by donteatpoop on Jun 29, 2006
ZavuSilverlight	Feb 28, 2005	Not bad, improve grammar and I think it will do well. by ZavuSilverlight on Feb 28, 2005
INinja	Feb 14, 2005	Lots of mistakes like Homerpython said, but there are some good lines, And it is a cool concept. by INinja on Feb 14, 2005
jeffisthebest	Feb 11, 2005	Too many mistakes, but an okay story. Also, you didn't separate your paragraphs. by jeffisthebest on Feb 11, 2005