Life in Cherry Valley, Arkansas

Written by jokor27 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
apotheosis		Jun 17, 2007	First off, the random numerical descriptions added absolutely nothing to the story, not that there really was a story to begin with. It was not well put together. Pick up a book and read it. Then read this. You should quickly see where you went wrong. by apotheosis on Jun 17, 2007
donteatpoop		Jan 23, 2006	I'm donteatpoop (26, 5'11 250lbs). This story blew ass. I'm not sure why it was important for you to tell everyone's age, wieght, and hieght like that... Was that just so you wouldn't have to describe them later on? More details actually described would have made this a better story. by donteatpoop on Jan 23, 2006