Idk I’ll just change this later

Written by EarthTurd / NR: Not Rated / 7.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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Amonite
Amonite		 Nov 3, 2019
The concept of this is interesting but it's incredibly lazy in execution. Even the "winning" ending (at least the best I could find where everything was resolved and I didn't die or get trapped) literally says "meh" in the text. There are hints of a story but every interesting scene is confusingly written - the writing in general is poor.

I do like the interesting trick of looping back to a certain point after certain failed tries, but then it not just being a restart - your prior actions can still affect some future scenes.
by Amonite on Nov 3, 2019
FictionLV
FictionLV		 Oct 28, 2018
by FictionLV on Oct 28, 2018

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