Comments & Ratings
|Very good job! A very fun story and i hope you make tons more but take your time on them or stuff gets rushed! 10/10|
I urge you to make another like this, I had narrowed my views down to both Js and decided on Jane because she had been outside when one of the others had said they watched ALL of the guests disperse to their rooms, also it said he DID say he wished to rekindle his relationship with her, yet she said he did not. Made her look guilty. |
I looked over the other J and it seemed like it was odd that he would say he was in two places at once- so I thought, I dunno- but I had a 50/50 chance on either.
|This is probably the most enjoyable story I've read on this site to date. Excellent work!|
|Amazing! A wonderful, well thought out story.|
|Very good idea for a mystery story, I'm still in the process of figuring it out. But for a first time Mystery/Crime story it was a real fun read and enjoyed reading it. I still cant believe how much better you have gotten. Would have given you a 10 but I dont want you to stop writing and challenging yourself to write better stories. so I'll give you a 9.99|