The Bridge

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Author Rating Date Comment
SteveFreeling
SteveFreeling
May 29, 2014
by SteveFreeling on May 29, 2014
Thickskullman
Thickskullman
May 19, 2013
Mature and fairly well written.
by Thickskullman on May 19, 2013
apotheosis
apotheosis
Aug 10, 2006
Well done, a very good idea and a decent execution. I would've perhaps liked to see it developed a bit more but it was still good.
by apotheosis on Aug 10, 2006
calia386
calia386
May 7, 2006
I thought this was a well made story. I enjoyed reading it. This story had some good choices to make.
by calia386 on May 7, 2006
jp33
jp33
Apr 12, 2006
by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
Marshmello
Marshmello
Mar 19, 2006
by Marshmello on Mar 19, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
Jun 9, 2005
Very good story, very well written. It was short and sweet, my only regrets were that it was too short, and alot of the choices lead to the same ending.
by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2005
Mysterio74
Mysterio74
May 21, 2005
by Mysterio74 on May 21, 2005
Morathi
Morathi
Apr 23, 2005
Good story, but I would have liked it if more dialogue with the woman was included. Talking her down wasn't much of a challenge.
by Morathi on Apr 23, 2005
holyred
holyred
Apr 4, 2005
pretty good(actually something like what happened to me in real life, but I still have yet to pursuade him otherwise.
by holyred on Apr 4, 2005
retlin
retlin
Feb 7, 2005
I agree with the people above. You should seperate your thoughts with paragraphs, instead of lumping them in a large segment. Very good story line. Keep coming up with new ideas and stories.
by retlin on Feb 7, 2005
CelticFrostQueen
CelticFrostQueen
Jan 20, 2005
You know how to tell a story well. However, you need to use spaces and paragraphs to make for easier reading. Keep up the good work :)
by CelticFrostQueen on Jan 20, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Jan 17, 2005
Too bad there are no .s, otherwise it would be an 8.3 or maybe 8.5. Very good vocabulary, and a very good storyline. I hope you keep writing! For the next story, when you start a new paragraph, make sure you separate them with a line in between.
by jeffisthebest on Jan 17, 2005
Cab
Cab
Jan 17, 2005
Indeed
by Cab on Jan 17, 2005

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