The Bridge

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Author	Date	Comment
Mystical	Apr 19, 2020	It's short, sweet, and realistic. Very heartwarming and it the choices made a lot of sense. I wish it was a bit longer but this is very good. by Mystical on Apr 19, 2020
SteveFreeling	May 29, 2014	by SteveFreeling on May 29, 2014
Thickskullman	May 19, 2013	Mature and fairly well written. by Thickskullman on May 19, 2013
apotheosis	Aug 10, 2006	Well done, a very good idea and a decent execution. I would've perhaps liked to see it developed a bit more but it was still good. by apotheosis on Aug 10, 2006
calia386	May 7, 2006	I thought this was a well made story. I enjoyed reading it. This story had some good choices to make. by calia386 on May 7, 2006
jp33	Apr 12, 2006	by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
Marshmello	Mar 19, 2006	by Marshmello on Mar 19, 2006
donteatpoop	Jun 9, 2005	Very good story, very well written. It was short and sweet, my only regrets were that it was too short, and alot of the choices lead to the same ending. by donteatpoop on Jun 9, 2005
Mysterio74	May 21, 2005	by Mysterio74 on May 21, 2005
Morathi	Apr 23, 2005	Good story, but I would have liked it if more dialogue with the woman was included. Talking her down wasn't much of a challenge. by Morathi on Apr 23, 2005
holyred	Apr 4, 2005	pretty good(actually something like what happened to me in real life, but I still have yet to pursuade him otherwise. by holyred on Apr 4, 2005
retlin	Feb 7, 2005	I agree with the people above. You should seperate your thoughts with paragraphs, instead of lumping them in a large segment. Very good story line. Keep coming up with new ideas and stories. by retlin on Feb 7, 2005
CelticFrostQueen	Jan 20, 2005	You know how to tell a story well. However, you need to use spaces and paragraphs to make for easier reading. Keep up the good work :) by CelticFrostQueen on Jan 20, 2005
jeffisthebest	Jan 17, 2005	Too bad there are no .s, otherwise it would be an 8.3 or maybe 8.5. Very good vocabulary, and a very good storyline. I hope you keep writing! For the next story, when you start a new paragraph, make sure you separate them with a line in between. by jeffisthebest on Jan 17, 2005
Cab	Jan 17, 2005	Indeed by Cab on Jan 17, 2005

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