The Man

Written by Cab / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 7.88 (8 ratings) (8)
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zaxoman
zaxoman		 Apr 12, 2008
Pretty good story, but it doesn't make much sense.
by zaxoman on Apr 12, 2008
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Jan 6, 2006
Interesting tale. Needs work, though.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 6, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Dec 18, 2005
Decent story that has promise, but really needs a lot of work.
by donteatpoop on Dec 18, 2005
Jonas
Jonas		 Jan 17, 2005
Very Nice
by Jonas on Jan 17, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Jan 17, 2005
I really did like it. Very good, Cab. Quite haunting!!
by jeffisthebest on Jan 17, 2005
Niceboy
Niceboy		 Jan 17, 2005
i liked the story...
by Niceboy on Jan 17, 2005
RiotGrrrl
RiotGrrrl		 Jan 16, 2005
So far, so good. :)
by RiotGrrrl on Jan 16, 2005
DMOC
DMOC		 Jan 16, 2005
This book has an excellent start to it! The plot is great. The only thing is that the vampire bite mark endings are getting a bit repetitive...and a lot of rooms are very short. Another thing: this adventure should have you making your own choices, not if Vlad speaks to you or if he runs away...
by DMOC on Jan 16, 2005

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