high school

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Sep 15, 2018
Where do I start?

Poor grammar, too many loose ends, no plot, and no real endgame. I laughed at how terrible this story is. I've come across all too many stories just like this one. Unfortunately, all of them that I've read seem to have been written by people older than 12 (idk maybe just a guess seems like it), and this one seems to be no different.
by NoProblemsHere on Sep 15, 2018

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