Final Quest

Comments & Ratings

by donteatpoop on Feb 28, 2016
it was really good. i thought it was really cool. good job, cat2000
by Jazz4455 on May 19, 2015
Dafuq Pely? That's the worst reason for a low rating ever. Undeserving.
by donteatpoop on Mar 11, 2015
No issue with the story. Ready for some change at the top of the page.
by Pelyphin on Mar 4, 2015
by Creeper909 on Feb 18, 2015
I have to say, this is SO long. But even better, it is SO good. I would read this a billion times a DAY.
by Creeper909 on Feb 17, 2015
Very very awesome!! I didn't quite finish it but I love it so far!
by Bandra on Oct 15, 2014
by dnextreme88 on Aug 10, 2014
Good and has a lot of branches, but predictable.
by Lackofmop on Jun 30, 2013
Why the endless loop of crossroads? Why??? Is that really necessary? No. Otherwise, if it had actually finished, I would have really liked it!
by Pooky642 on May 11, 2012
by Tim2000 on Jul 24, 2011
I remember reading this one a long time ago, and I probably would rate this one higher if it hadn't been for the boring crossroad stuff. The rest of it was done well.
by EndMaster on Jan 3, 2011
by Matabichos on Feb 27, 2008
by Goren on Aug 9, 2007
That was great you should make another! THANKS!
by CCRUNNR on Apr 12, 2007
Interesting ideas. A lot of complexity, and a very large story, which is nice. Some description was lacking in a lot of rooms, some of the crossroads seemed pointless, and some of the plot grew monotonous but due to the size and amount of work that looks like it was put in I'll give it an 8.
by apotheosis on Jul 29, 2006
Excellent story! I greatly enjoyed the depth of choices and the way the story engaged me.
by druidwolf on Mar 21, 2006
It's good, but I got trapped at some crossroads... (**left** come to some crossroads, **right**... you come to some crossroads... etc)
by Marshmello on Mar 19, 2006
Too obtuse.

Also, I agree with donteatpoop - WHY the hell is Esther looking for something that hasn't been seen for hundreds of years exactly?!? A) Dragons, idealized as much as they are, could not possibly have had that long of a lifespan, and B) Something that's been missing THAT long and NOT needed for THAT long had better have a HELLUVA explanation behind its sudden urgent necessity before the average adventurer starts out. Sheesh.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 8, 2005
why are we going after the green dragon? it hasn't been seen for hundreds of years, right?
by donteatpoop on May 26, 2005
Wahooo!!!! Finaly. This is the best cyoa... I mean IS I've ever read. Maybe that's 'causer it was the first one I read here. meh. Anyway, I can't belive it's finaly finished! yay! Great story. thx.
by steelshadowL on Apr 29, 2005
by jp33 on Mar 16, 2005
Very good.
by jeffisthebest on Oct 26, 2004
It's relatively easy, though it does take some time. When you get to a crossroads, look at the links to left and right. The link(s) you've already clicked on will be shaded differently to the ones you haven't
by Cat2000 on Oct 26, 2004
by HydraLing on Oct 16, 2004
Interesting. Better than what I can currently do, but good. Not too short, but not too long. Good use of room looping. It has GaMeR's full attention. Keep up the good work
by GaMeR86 on Oct 6, 2004
by easlern on Oct 1, 2004
by Victoria7 on May 18, 2004
Yeah, somehow I managed to free myself from the left right curse. I don't know how, though!!! Kinda wish I did...
by ShannonK on Apr 25, 2004
Wow. I can't believe there are so many rooms!!!
by ShannonK on Apr 25, 2004
Um...I keep getting stuck at "You come to a crossroads: right or left?" Doesn't matter which way you go, you just end up coming to another crossroads, and another, and another. Pretty hilarious.
by Izzers on Apr 22, 2004
by JaMassey on Apr 12, 2004
Great story. It was one of the first I ever read. But I do have to critisize the fact that there is very little description in the rooms.
by TheKoolAidGuy on Mar 6, 2004
it's definately a 10...I almost made it a 9 (it sucks that it doesnt have an ending) but the story and characters have great depth and it's one of the larger stories at this site.
by seamanvincent on Feb 7, 2004
Finding a dragon may not be an original concept, but this is a good story. It's well written. The layout makes sense and it's pretty absorbing. It would be good if the left or right choices had a bit more description though, even if it's irrelevant.
by Benway on Feb 5, 2004
by KrzyPrincess on Jan 28, 2004
I said it before and I say it again: "I love it! Can't wait till it's finished." :)
by Nuquerna on Jan 28, 2004
Great story! I wish you had added more detail to Ester's surroundings. It would make the story much more vivid and when it comes to the choices of left or right it would make it easier to choose the correct one instead of guessing.
by lioness1081 on Jan 24, 2004
Wow, I love this. You are an excellent writer! This is truly amazing! I am very impressed. I look forward to reading more of your stuff.
by CJW on Jan 16, 2004
by lxkoons on Jan 10, 2004
by iceprincess108 on Jan 9, 2004
by ladyjilla on Jan 9, 2004

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