Killer in the school

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Shota	Jan 15, 2020	Awesome! Love the story. The suspense is great. Although it only have one right way to get to the end of the story, it's good. Everything good. Makes me wonder who the killer is but I found out who before reaching library. Of course they are not alone, haha! It's a bit sad to watch your friends die tho. Riddles are good and easy but it doesn't make any sense while the killer is chasing you. But... what is the reason they work together with the killer? Why kill? And... Matt and Cameron! They were killed and were left behind how come their dead bodies arrive first in the library? Haha. Overall the story really entertain me. Not boring at all. Very good! by Shota on Jan 15, 2020
SteveFreeling	Nov 4, 2016	This is crap. There's no way to win. by SteveFreeling on Nov 4, 2016
Thickskullman	May 14, 2013	Always one right choice and one wrong choice. Boring, linear and predictable. by Thickskullman on May 14, 2013
Yaya1314	Jul 12, 2011	That was great! It's a 1st to see a story finished on here. Good job! by Yaya1314 on Jul 12, 2011
Armylover	May 1, 2011	It was pretty good by Armylover on May 1, 2011
facebookgeek	Feb 5, 2011	Great! Action, Deaths, Blood! How Do You Come Up With This? by facebookgeek on Feb 5, 2011
facebookgeek	Feb 5, 2011	That is the best story i have seen in my life. You should try to get it published because it is better than The X Factor And Britans Got Talent combined. by facebookgeek on Feb 5, 2011
ArkeNamrov	May 5, 2010	First Decent Story I've Seen So Far. Thanks For Having ZERO Loose Ends. by ArkeNamrov on May 5, 2010
vancelandow	Mar 21, 2010	Some of it was way too obvious and expected, but other than that, it was a great, suspenseful story. by vancelandow on Mar 21, 2010
Firestarter	Oct 3, 2009	by Firestarter on Oct 3, 2009
torud	Jan 31, 2009	by torud on Jan 31, 2009
AssassinByBlood	Oct 19, 2008	Wow the suspence and the riddles I had to ask my family about the son one Well done by AssassinByBlood on Oct 19, 2008
magic	Oct 11, 2008	I love the story! It it so awsewome, it's dramatic, survial skills, and perserverance! I give it 4 stars! by magic on Oct 11, 2008
zaxoman	Apr 14, 2008	This was really a great story with lots of suspense. I don't know why you would make riddles in the story, though. by zaxoman on Apr 14, 2008
Armando322	Jul 17, 2007	I thought it was an incredible story, even though there was no "Happy ending" by Armando322 on Jul 17, 2007
Victoria7	May 2, 2007	i like this story because unlike OTHER stories at least this one is finsihed. by Victoria7 on May 2, 2007
apotheosis	Feb 1, 2007	Concept was alright, riddles weren't bad, fairly good room count but writing quality was nothing to brag about. by apotheosis on Feb 1, 2007
Dan2	Mar 17, 2006	It was good. Some of the twists I thought were a little too obvious though especially the one at the end. The riddles were cool but it didn't make much sense why kids would be asking you riddles while there is killing and slaughtering going on in the school. by Dan2 on Mar 17, 2006
jeffisthebest	Feb 9, 2006	Well, at least he spelled things right. by jeffisthebest on Feb 9, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby	Jan 26, 2006	Hmmmm. Like DEP said, it had it's moments. I didn't really like the riddles, thought you could have done better there. AT least it's not full of loose ends, though. Good effort! by ChubbyTeletubby on Jan 26, 2006
donteatpoop	Jul 2, 2005	it has its moments. by donteatpoop on Jul 2, 2005
samnash	Jul 2, 2005	i am a new user on this and spent the hole of my week readiing storys on the web site. this has to be the best of all the storys!!!! i love the little riddels and the great twist at the end!!!! if i was steven spilberg this would be my next movie by samnash on Jul 2, 2005
theknight	Jun 24, 2005	This is my first story. I hope you like it and whats the best part? Its actually finished so enjoy! by theknight on Jun 24, 2005

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