Hiei Part 2

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Jun 2, 2011	Great story. I love the plot, storyline and the writing altogether. No flaws, only the fact that there's no paragraph spaces. Damn it I had to skip a few pages because without paragraphs, no spaces to breath in, the writing is just a great big black and white mess! I then became bored with this, but after the pages I had to skip, came the parts that I needed to read, and it was worth it. by TheCandyMan on Jun 2, 2011
magic	Aug 5, 2009	Great job on the romance and sex part, but I think donteatpoop is right, you should have seperate paragraphs. by magic on Aug 5, 2009
kirara	Feb 25, 2009	by kirara on Feb 25, 2009
rendogg	Jul 27, 2007	by rendogg on Jul 27, 2007
jp33	Apr 12, 2006	by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
donteatpoop	Sep 13, 2005	There is a thing in the English language called a paragraph. Allow me to elaborate. par by donteatpoop on Sep 13, 2005
LadyLeaMarie	Jan 14, 2005	Another great fic. Please keep writing these, they're fun to read! by LadyLeaMarie on Jan 14, 2005