Stranger in a Strange Apartment

Written by Luridhope / NR: Not Rated / 3.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 24, 2011
What apoth said. I was feeling hopeful as I read the first page, but the grammar was just terrible. I'm talking about the spelling here. Let's just stick with what apoth said. It has potential. Bad grammar. And only 12 rooms.
by TheCandyMan on Jul 24, 2011
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 27, 2007
Had potential... but needs more... of everything.
by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007

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