Riddlebox 1

Written by BenjaminWolfe / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
KingMalice	Oct 23, 2010	by KingMalice on Oct 23, 2010
YazZMaN	Dec 5, 2009	Pretty cool; there were a few simple mistakes and then plot was kind of thin, but the story is kinda fun. You didn't seem to pay too much mind to grammar, but I didn't any dock points for that, since the lack of quotation marks and commas didn't make the story any harder to read. by YazZMaN on Dec 5, 2009
Ann	Oct 18, 2005	by Ann on Oct 18, 2005
retlin	Jan 6, 2005	Good job. The ending could have been better, more riddles would have been nice to. Also, you should explain the riddle on the next page if you get it right, this would make it better. I can't wait to read mor of these stories. by retlin on Jan 6, 2005
CelticFrostQueen	Dec 30, 2004	I LOVE this idea! Lots of fun, keeps the mind working and really makes you think. Very good! Keep working on it. I'd like to see more :) by CelticFrostQueen on Dec 30, 2004
jeffisthebest	Dec 22, 2004	Good story, but there just weren't enough riddles, and you didnt separate your paragraphs. by jeffisthebest on Dec 22, 2004