Riddlebox 1

Written by BenjaminWolfe / NR: Not Rated / 7.83 (6 ratings) (6)
Restart Story Statistics Add To Favorites My Submissions View Ratings Rate or Comment Bookmarks Contributors Loose Ends Submission Guidelines

Comments & Ratings

Author Rating Date Comment
KingMalice
KingMalice		 Oct 23, 2010
by KingMalice on Oct 23, 2010
YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Dec 5, 2009
Pretty cool; there were a few simple mistakes and then plot was kind of thin, but the story is kinda fun.

You didn't seem to pay too much mind to grammar, but I didn't any dock points for that, since the lack of quotation marks and commas didn't make the story any harder to read.
by YazZMaN on Dec 5, 2009
Ann
Ann		 Oct 18, 2005
by Ann on Oct 18, 2005
retlin
retlin		 Jan 6, 2005
Good job. The ending could have been better, more riddles would have been nice to. Also, you should explain the riddle on the next page if you get it right, this would make it better. I can't wait to read mor of these stories.
by retlin on Jan 6, 2005
CelticFrostQueen
CelticFrostQueen		 Dec 30, 2004
I LOVE this idea! Lots of fun, keeps the mind working and really makes you think. Very good! Keep working on it. I'd like to see more :)
by CelticFrostQueen on Dec 30, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Dec 22, 2004
Good story, but there just weren't enough riddles, and you didnt separate your paragraphs.
by jeffisthebest on Dec 22, 2004

Rate Story