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Garricks Screwed Up Life

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Author Rating Date Comment
shadowzxv
shadowzxv
Dec 14, 2007
Funny, but needs more work
by shadowzxv on Dec 14, 2007
apotheosis
apotheosis
Jun 16, 2007
Pretty crappy....
by apotheosis on Jun 16, 2007
donteatpoop
donteatpoop
May 13, 2006
Dude...
by donteatpoop on May 13, 2006
Morathi
Morathi
Apr 25, 2005
A lot of rooms don't give you much choice, there isn't much description, and not too much happens in each room. I'm giving it higher than a one because the chapter level went more than a few deep, and I've seen worse stories.
by Morathi on Apr 25, 2005
splapped
splapped
Apr 16, 2005
um, to many ends. it should go on more
by splapped on Apr 16, 2005
DMOC
DMOC
Jan 29, 2005
Man, this story is definitely HORRIBLE! You have to describe things!

There's no dialogue.

There's hardly any stories that extend beyond 7 rooms!

You need to put more stuff on the page!

The language is astrochious!

Some choices are pointless.

The plot is incredibly boring.

The endings are really crazy.

The good part? At least someone would laugh at the silly endings. Good job, humorous!
by DMOC on Jan 29, 2005
haffenden182
haffenden182
Jan 2, 2005
by haffenden182 on Jan 2, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest
Dec 6, 2004
Wow. Very very poor, I know you're new, but this is really bad man. You NEED to describe things.
by jeffisthebest on Dec 6, 2004

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