Garricks Screwed Up Life

Written by llbountyhunterll / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
shadowzxv	Dec 14, 2007	Funny, but needs more work by shadowzxv on Dec 14, 2007
apotheosis	Jun 16, 2007	Pretty crappy.... by apotheosis on Jun 16, 2007
donteatpoop	May 13, 2006	Dude... by donteatpoop on May 13, 2006
Morathi	Apr 25, 2005	A lot of rooms don't give you much choice, there isn't much description, and not too much happens in each room. I'm giving it higher than a one because the chapter level went more than a few deep, and I've seen worse stories. by Morathi on Apr 25, 2005
splapped	Apr 16, 2005	um, to many ends. it should go on more by splapped on Apr 16, 2005
DMOC	Jan 29, 2005	Man, this story is definitely HORRIBLE! You have to describe things! There's no dialogue. There's hardly any stories that extend beyond 7 rooms! You need to put more stuff on the page! The language is astrochious! Some choices are pointless. The plot is incredibly boring. The endings are really crazy. The good part? At least someone would laugh at the silly endings. Good job, humorous! by DMOC on Jan 29, 2005
haffenden182	Jan 2, 2005	by haffenden182 on Jan 2, 2005
jeffisthebest	Dec 6, 2004	Wow. Very very poor, I know you're new, but this is really bad man. You NEED to describe things. by jeffisthebest on Dec 6, 2004