Gotham's Story

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Nice work. Few grammatical errors and nice writing, but it lacked the "choose your own adventure" aspect that I had in mind. It was just a retelling of the original story, but the introduction was a well-made hook. I think you should put many more rooms into this, and where the story would end (i.e. death choices, not choosing the shortcut, etc.), branch off from there and add more to the story to reinforce the "choices." Otherwise, awesome work!
-NPH
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