Gotham's Story

Written by Dustfinger / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 8.67 (3 ratings) (3)
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NoProblemsHere
NoProblemsHere		 Aug 17, 2018
Nice work. Few grammatical errors and nice writing, but it lacked the "choose your own adventure" aspect that I had in mind. It was just a retelling of the original story, but the introduction was a well-made hook. I think you should put many more rooms into this, and where the story would end (i.e. death choices, not choosing the shortcut, etc.), branch off from there and add more to the story to reinforce the "choices." Otherwise, awesome work!
-NPH
by NoProblemsHere on Aug 17, 2018
Stalkingtiger
Stalkingtiger		 Aug 1, 2018
by Stalkingtiger on Aug 1, 2018
Dustfinger
Dustfinger		 Aug 1, 2018
by Dustfinger on Aug 1, 2018
Dustfinger
Dustfinger		 Mar 1, 2018
by Dustfinger on Mar 1, 2018

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