Cross it ovah baby!

Written by otakuchan / NR: Not Rated / 2.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 27, 2007
Bad.
by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007
jamestkirk
jamestkirk		 Jan 29, 2005
OMG, your story sounds stupid from the beginning! :P Total stinker, I mean, that's just my opinion, don't take it seriously, but could you use actual people names, and not like weird Japanese names like Sasuki, or whatever that one persons name was, and what's with the being connected to each other and stuff? Are they dating or something? Man, try to use real names, like Ashley, or Robert.
by jamestkirk on Jan 29, 2005

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