Dogfight

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Thickskullman	May 15, 2013	Nice and self-contained. by Thickskullman on May 15, 2013
TheCandyMan	May 11, 2011	7/10 because it was very well written, I don't understand planes though. Haha. And plus, the rooms kept looping over and over. Like if I go in for a dive, I basically start over again. :S But it's a great story. Short, but I understand why. by TheCandyMan on May 11, 2011
apotheosis	Jun 27, 2007	Not much of a story, but very good action. Also, I liked that you finished it. Short and sweet. by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007
Chickenman	Aug 28, 2006	by Chickenman on Aug 28, 2006
jeffisthebest	Dec 3, 2004	OK.. quite a few things to say. First off, good story with good action and a typically boring idea that is made interesting. One flaw I could find was that, when someone has to choose the next part, it said a whole lot of stuff that I had no idea what the things were and all the directions. You made a common newbie error. You made too many choices in alot of rooms which causes you to run out of ideas, bores the reader, and makes you write a WHOLE lot of rooms. Good job! by jeffisthebest on Dec 3, 2004
trumpetfalcon	Nov 30, 2004	Nice job, great detail and I love the Snoopy allusion ;) I also appriecate the lenth of the story, and how it still wraps up nicely in the end. Write on! by trumpetfalcon on Nov 30, 2004