Hero of Asuras

Written by SteveG / NR: Not Rated / 5.20 (5 ratings) (5)
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ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Jul 5, 2005
A mediocre story. Try and be a little more original and descriptive, and you'll have yourself a nice peice of work.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 5, 2005
Ravenchild
Ravenchild		 Nov 26, 2004
by Ravenchild on Nov 26, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Sep 20, 2004
Pretty good! Im trying to write one like it
by jeffisthebest on Sep 20, 2004
flameofthewest
flameofthewest		 Jul 15, 2004
by flameofthewest on Jul 15, 2004
Benway
Benway		 Feb 5, 2004
Pretty cliched. A bit more originality would help.
by Benway on Feb 5, 2004

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