Hero of Asuras

Written by SteveG / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
ChubbyTeletubby	Jul 5, 2005	A mediocre story. Try and be a little more original and descriptive, and you'll have yourself a nice peice of work. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 5, 2005
Ravenchild	Nov 26, 2004	by Ravenchild on Nov 26, 2004
jeffisthebest	Sep 20, 2004	Pretty good! Im trying to write one like it by jeffisthebest on Sep 20, 2004
flameofthewest	Jul 15, 2004	by flameofthewest on Jul 15, 2004
Benway	Feb 5, 2004	Pretty cliched. A bit more originality would help. by Benway on Feb 5, 2004