CYOA: You and your friends bad life You/Kurama

Written by CrystalQueen16 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 4.00 (3 ratings) (3)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jul 25, 2011
OK, so the spelling and grammar isn't bad. But the writing style is just terrible and didn't interest me in any kind of way.

Do you also care to share why there are only two rooms? No?
by TheCandyMan on Jul 25, 2011
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 27, 2007
This is to offset the 10 it got... otherwise the story would have recieved a 2 or 3. Poorly written, no substance... not enjoyable.
by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007
CrimsonRed
CrimsonRed		 Jan 29, 2006
by CrimsonRed on Jan 29, 2006

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