"Invasion" [GONE WRONG]

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
aidenj	Mar 14, 2017	really man you have to make it longer. i get that you paragraphs are long but still. TRhis makes me mad. by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017
aidenj	Mar 14, 2017	its either frank or fred. what the phlegm by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017
aidenj	Mar 14, 2017	some grammar and spelling mistakes. for ex "when john had said that's wrong,he put down the gun" you see there is no space between the comma by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017