"Invasion" [GONE WRONG]

Written by Gamingx24 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 3.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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aidenj
aidenj		 Mar 14, 2017
really man you have to make it longer. i get that you paragraphs are long but still. TRhis makes me mad.
by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017
aidenj
aidenj		 Mar 14, 2017
its either frank or fred. what the phlegm
by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017
aidenj
aidenj		 Mar 14, 2017
some grammar and spelling mistakes. for ex "when john had said that's wrong,he put down the gun" you see there is no space between the comma
by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017

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