KILL Blood Blood KILL

Written by TeyaStorm / NR: Not Rated / 4.33 (3 ratings) (3)
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joke12345
joke12345		 Mar 14, 2017
confusing, spelling errors, too many deaths
by joke12345 on Mar 14, 2017
joke12345
joke12345		 Mar 14, 2017
Proofreading errors: You're up stairs and hear little girls laughing downstairs, When man with a name tag that says Anthony in white suite comes to you and gives you're food.,

A little confusing, TOOOOOOOOOOO many deaths, many spelling errors
by joke12345 on Mar 14, 2017
aidenj
aidenj		 Mar 14, 2017
very bad english. cant even read this. sometimes i dont think i am in real life when i read this.How?
by aidenj on Mar 14, 2017
TeyaStorm
TeyaStorm		 Mar 7, 2017
Awesome
by TeyaStorm on Mar 7, 2017

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