Dog's Life.

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
epsi10n	Jul 26, 2017	This is really cute! It's kind of funny imagining what the dog's thinking when he runs into a wall by epsi10n on Jul 26, 2017
natethegrate03	Mar 14, 2017	After talking to you I realized it can beard but it should still be a little better but I now know that it is hard to do. by natethegrate03 on Mar 14, 2017
natethegrate03	Mar 14, 2017	This story is pretty good, better than the last on I read. The reason I took of 4 points was for one HUGE reason, Is this dog the worlds smartest dog or the worlds dumbest dog. He understands human words but he doesn't know what they are, it makes it very confusing. by natethegrate03 on Mar 14, 2017
Liv2004	Mar 14, 2017	Very creative! I would say to use some longer sentences instead of just "i went here they went there...." Maybe combine them to make the story more interesting to read. by Liv2004 on Mar 14, 2017