Dog's Life.

Written by sparkles5680 / G: General Audiences / 7.50 (2 ratings) (2)
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epsi10n
epsi10n		 Jul 26, 2017
This is really cute! It's kind of funny imagining what the dog's thinking when he runs into a wall
by epsi10n on Jul 26, 2017
natethegrate03
natethegrate03		 Mar 14, 2017
After talking to you I realized it can beard but it should still be a little better but I now know that it is hard to do.
by natethegrate03 on Mar 14, 2017
natethegrate03
natethegrate03		 Mar 14, 2017
This story is pretty good, better than the last on I read. The reason I took of 4 points was for one HUGE reason, Is this dog the worlds smartest dog or the worlds dumbest dog. He understands human words but he doesn't know what they are, it makes it very confusing.
by natethegrate03 on Mar 14, 2017
Liv2004
Liv2004		 Mar 14, 2017
Very creative!
I would say to use some longer sentences instead of just "i went here they went there...." Maybe combine them to make the story more interesting to read.
by Liv2004 on Mar 14, 2017

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