Comments & Ratings
I love zombie media, movies, books ect. I am just in love with the whole genre. That being said, you could definitely use more description and details to enhance the plot.|
Also, I took off several points because you torch a zombie using wine?! This really pissed me off. Wine is only 12-14% alcohol by content, you are not going to be able to get a zombie up in flames with it no matter how hard you try. I want realism in my zombie stories, and that just ruined it so I took off 3 points. Would've been an 8, but it is now a five.
|i thought it was a good story. if you added just a little more polish to it i would have given it a 10|
Man, I HATE it when I "wake up to the sounds of tarffic"!|
What a buzzkill.
|Has alot of potential. An enjoyable read. Though the choices do tend to come up a bit fast.|
|I couldn't rate this story high. For one, seven endings come up in 9 pages or less, and one ending comes up in 10. The choices come way to quick, the reader doesn't read much until they have a choice. The good parts? It's humorous and has the potentional to be better.|
Sorry, but I really hate stories that have only one path that doesn't lead to death/room. Know why? It's not a CYOA if you do that.|