Holocaust Story

Written by willc / NR: Not Rated / 8.00 (1 ratings) (1)
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mizal
mizal		 May 2, 2016
by mizal on May 2, 2016
mizal
mizal		 May 1, 2016
Excellent story, one of the best I've seen here in awhile. There's only about twenty pages but there are real choices and a good amount of content here, so I really hope you finish it.

Just a couple of small things I wanted to point out, I'm pretty sure women weren't automatically killed, if they were healthy, though you're right that the elderly and the children were. (http://www.yadvashem.org/yv/en/education/ceremonies/women_auschwitz.asp was a page I found with some quick googling about women's experiences there, and I'm sure there's a lot more if you were to do a more thorough search.) I'm also not sure it would've been so easy to find a conveniently located hole in the fence that the guards had somehow not noticed, but all in all I can tell you did some research here and I appreciate that. I've seen so many 'historical' stories that are completely half assed, and obviously with a subject like this you want to see it treated respectfully.
by mizal on May 1, 2016

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