Comments & Ratings
I'm not a huge fan of school based stories, mostly because they usually seem to be a whole lot of nothing happening. I wish I could say things were different in this situation, but there's so little here right now and most pages consist of less then ten words about choices like 'sit next to Carl or sit next to Sam'. |
I'm guessing whoever wrote this may be pretty young, so I'd recommend rereading your favorite book and paying attention to things like the amount of detail and description used, the way the author introduces and establishes the characters and moves the plot along, and so on.