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Apr 25, 2016
Started off very promising, even if a little cliche with the whole chosen one, century old bloodline thing. ( the way, a 'century' isn't very long at all for a bloodline, that basically means it's just you, your mom and one of your grandparents....) The ending I got kind of killed it for me though, there's all this magical stuff and adventure being hinted at and then your sister just randomly pushes you over during an argument and you go into a coma the rest of your life? Surely there was a less pointless and anticlimatic way to end that branch.
by mizal on Apr 25, 2016

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