Sacrifice

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
mizal	Apr 26, 2016	Well I was wondering how one of your stories only had one star. This starts off really well, I wish you'd go back and work on it some more sometime. Though to be fair, even the shitty, rushed parts are still on par with many stories I've seen here. by mizal on Apr 26, 2016
nightwing86	Apr 21, 2015	Started good, but then it goes downhill fast. :( by nightwing86 on Apr 21, 2015
Vesnicie	Mar 17, 2015	I officially object to the rating system not allowing me to give you a negative score here where it really counts, not that namby-pamby little contest. This accidental collection of misaligned words and fragments is such a stinking heap of filth-ridden putrescence, I could barely recover my wits after it assaulted me with such frothing rabid violence. There should be a criminal code for stories like this, for life-sucking, soul-destroying, sanity-masticating affronts to all humanity. I hate this story even more than I hate mildew, Nazis and children. by Vesnicie on Mar 17, 2015