Rover of the Sands

Written by Vesnicie / R: Restricted - Adult

Comments & Ratings

Author	Rating	Date	Comment
ChubbyTeletubby		May 18, 2016	This story had/has a lot of potential. I would say much like my Mageslayer story I abandoned long ago. Only your writing is on the next level. I feel like someday we should collaborate on a writing project, it seems my weakness is your strength and your strength is my weakness. We really should collaborate sometime. The story itself was awesome, the world was fully developed in a way that could be published in a book. Not like my juvenile endeavors. I know some of the shit I write is funny and at times moving, but it is never really fully developed. You have a way of really making your worlds REAL. My worlds are cartoons. I liked the concept of the witches eyes. I've seen them recently, upon awakening from a nightmare I would wish on no one. I really did see a pair of eyes...beyond description. Great story. I'm sorry it never got finished. But these kind of stories are hard to finish. by ChubbyTeletubby on May 18, 2016