Comments & Ratings
||May 18, 2016||
This story had/has a lot of potential. I would say much like my Mageslayer story I abandoned long ago. Only your writing is on the next level. I feel like someday we should collaborate on a writing project, it seems my weakness is your strength and your strength is my weakness. We really should collaborate sometime. |
The story itself was awesome, the world was fully developed in a way that could be published in a book. Not like my juvenile endeavors. I know some of the shit I write is funny and at times moving, but it is never really fully developed. You have a way of really making your worlds REAL. My worlds are cartoons.
I liked the concept of the witches eyes. I've seen them recently, upon awakening from a nightmare I would wish on no one. I really did see a pair of eyes...beyond description.
Great story. I'm sorry it never got finished. But these kind of stories are hard to finish.