The Last Stand

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
sedna	Feb 9, 2014	some rooms need to be merged, the options are not really options by sedna on Feb 9, 2014
donteatpoop	Jan 13, 2014	I'm not rating this yet, just wanted to offer some comments. This reads more like an outline. You need some description. A little work on that and you can add an eerie feeling to the scene. Little things like, time of day; what kind of shit is the character hearing or thinking... That sort of thing. by donteatpoop on Jan 13, 2014
SteveFreeling	Dec 5, 2013	by SteveFreeling on Dec 5, 2013
MizLiv	Aug 9, 2013	by MizLiv on Aug 9, 2013
MizLiv	Aug 9, 2013	Honestly I don't like the last stand because i think the walking dead is better but i have to say i like the story6y that you came up with by MizLiv on Aug 9, 2013
werecat101	Jul 20, 2013	not very good the writing was OK but... by werecat101 on Jul 20, 2013
Lackofmop	Jul 19, 2013	I chose 'jimmy', and nothing happened. That makes the score a lot lower. However, the writing was okay. Not that good, though. It earned a 5. by Lackofmop on Jul 19, 2013