Amnesia the dark descent part 1

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
NightshadeX9	Aug 9, 2013	Erm.. I have mixed feelings about this. However the writing and voice of this story is good, there is no choice in the story. It is more of a short story with continue options. However the writing is good, based on amnesia. by NightshadeX9 on Aug 9, 2013
Lackofmop	Jun 30, 2013	Um this is okay, but this site is for choose your own adventures only. So I'm giving it a "4". by Lackofmop on Jun 30, 2013
werecat101	Jun 22, 2013	i thought it was well written but the fact that the only choice was continue.....no comment by werecat101 on Jun 22, 2013
Dan2	May 18, 2013	Need lesser choice by Dan2 on May 18, 2013
ramlod	May 10, 2013	by ramlod on May 10, 2013
ramlod	May 1, 2013	by ramlod on May 1, 2013
shelod	Apr 29, 2013	this stoy is the best stoy i ever read you r so good you shad make maer and i bet you will be a star ane way you r a best stoy retar better than this pepole thiar sacks and you will be amzing and amzing each time you make more amzing we will best budes for ever. by shelod on Apr 29, 2013
ramlod	Apr 28, 2013	Please rate and comment I just do this to see if I have any comments by ramlod on Apr 28, 2013
ramlod	Apr 27, 2013	by ramlod on Apr 27, 2013
ramlod	Apr 26, 2013	by ramlod on Apr 26, 2013
shelod	Apr 26, 2013	your a great writer you should make more stories this story is great by shelod on Apr 26, 2013