The Mysterious Object

Written by kuhl / G: General Audiences /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
apotheosis	Jun 27, 2007	-8 for having a retarded plot +5 for awesomely bad paint images by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007
donteatpoop	Jun 13, 2005	As far as detail goes, it's a childrens book. Excellent. Very entertaining. Loved the "I come from Deleware" option. I think kids would enjoy it. Only reason it wasn't rated higher by me was because it could have been longer, endings came up too soon. by donteatpoop on Jun 13, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Feb 28, 2005	I really hope no children ever read this. Ever. by ChubbyTeletubby on Feb 28, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Feb 28, 2005	I haven't read a word of this story but the artwork is great. What version of 'Paint' are you running? by ChubbyTeletubby on Feb 28, 2005
NCPolice55571	Oct 20, 2004	It's a fun read there are a lot worse, one suggestion I would give is try adding a little more detail into the story. Such as finding out the jewel is lucky you can go on to say what type of luck it brings to the reader and that's a story in itself right there, but keep on writing look foward to reading more. by NCPolice55571 on Oct 20, 2004
jeffisthebest	Oct 19, 2004	Pretty damn bad. by jeffisthebest on Oct 19, 2004
retlin	Oct 19, 2004	Your story is pretty bad. You dont have enough detailor length. The story is over before you get into it. by retlin on Oct 19, 2004