A Trip to The Past

Written by Priscilla / G: General Audiences / 7.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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sparkles5680
sparkles5680		 Mar 22, 2017
I would say that the story has a good plot but it is not really a choose your own story. I really wish that when you find the other door you could look at other things besides the time machine. But overall I really enjoyed reading this. Nice short story when you five minutes free. I think that it is also a good thing that those other chooses are endings because then you could imagine what it is like by yourself.
by sparkles5680 on Mar 22, 2017
ravenclawz
ravenclawz		 Jan 22, 2015
Not bad, but I basically picked EVERY single wrong choice possible. You should've made those choices actually a choice, because it basically is not a choose your own adventure, it's just a story. Kinda ruins the whole point of Infinite Story. But the story isn't bad, and the writing is good, so I'll still give it a good rating.
by ravenclawz on Jan 22, 2015
Thickskullman
Thickskullman		 Aug 23, 2013
by Thickskullman on Aug 23, 2013
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Aug 5, 2013
It's awesome. I just wish you could choose the laser sword.
by Lackofmop on Aug 5, 2013

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