The Machinist Child

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Mar 7, 2013
by Clark on Mar 7, 2013
Feb 2, 2012
I really loved this story!
I liked the idea of a child creating himself as God and really enjoyed the writing.
The only thing that stopped me from giving the story a 10 were a few spelling and grammar slip ups (like, the Doctors are always called Drs, which is just an abbreviation / title) and that there weren't that many choices. The few choices that were there weren't written yet, which made me a sad little toddler. But, I will keep watching. I definitely want to read the Robo-daddy option. ;3
by KazeYami on Feb 2, 2012

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