the first adventure

Written by frozo / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 2.00 (2 ratings) (2)
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Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 5, 2013
Um, it's okay, I guess. The grammar could use some work.
by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Feb 18, 2012
I once gouged my eyes out with my fingers, dug through the blood and eye jelly and just clawed them right out. I'd like to tell you a brief story about what lead up to this tragic event.

I read this story.

The end.
by donteatpoop on Feb 18, 2012

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