Eternal

Written by EndMaster / R: Restricted - Adult /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Grubby	May 25, 2022	by Grubby on May 25, 2022
Grubby	May 25, 2022	Great story and lovely writing. But more like a book, than interactive fiction. If you don't choose the Author's choices, you die. by Grubby on May 25, 2022
mizal	Sep 28, 2021	Fans of this may enjoy learning more of Semra's fate in Endmaster's newest story. https://chooseyourstory.com/story/the-pure,-the-vile-and-the-deadly by mizal on Sep 28, 2021
Hunterfang	Apr 16, 2021	by Hunterfang on Apr 16, 2021
Zero118	Feb 18, 2021	A lot of content with meaningful choices and great epilogues set in a creative world. What's not to love? Even the premature endings (where you don't reach an epilogue) are well-written and solid, which is a great way to ensure the whole story is great, and not just a few select paths. Without a doubt a must-read, where the question is not if the story is worth reading, but if you are worthy of reading it. by Zero118 on Feb 18, 2021
enterpride	Feb 18, 2021	by enterpride on Feb 18, 2021
Wizal	Jan 27, 2021	Legendary. by Wizal on Jan 27, 2021
antscoff	Dec 10, 2020	by antscoff on Dec 10, 2020
Starbourne	Nov 27, 2020	by Starbourne on Nov 27, 2020
PerforatedPenguin	Nov 22, 2020	by PerforatedPenguin on Nov 22, 2020
Ineffable	Aug 14, 2020	by Ineffable on Aug 14, 2020
Triclops	Jan 15, 2020	I am so fucking grateful for the existence of this story, because when I first found it I was a weak-willed person without hope. Nowadays I'm struggling to increase my personal power and become able to be a credit to myself. There are no real flaws in this story. When I was younger I did not like the character Decena, but blaming that on EndMaster is unfair. I dislike characters that are overly-infatuated with their lovers. I don't like woe-is-me romance options either. However, End is really good at writing that trope even if I don't enjoy it myself. by Triclops on Jan 15, 2020
Bucky	Jan 14, 2020	Eternal Bane by Bucky on Jan 14, 2020
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TurnipBandit	Nov 22, 2019	by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302	Nov 21, 2019	by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6	Nov 21, 2019	If only I could rate this higher than a 10. Just read it. You won’t regret even a second. by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef	Nov 21, 2019	by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
poisonmara	Nov 19, 2019	by poisonmara on Nov 19, 2019
venyanwarrior	Nov 19, 2019	by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka	Oct 24, 2019	by ninjapitka on Oct 24, 2019
Cricket	Aug 27, 2019	by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
Salamislim	Feb 8, 2018	Endmaster, I've been a fan of your stories for a long time now, and when I came back to this site on a whim to see if there was anything new, imagine my surprise when I saw you made an entirely new story with no loose ends YEARS ago. Necromancer was a huge influence on me, and I have to say Eternal definitely lives up to it. I kept going back and forth to get different endings... but when I got to ending 13 (Harbinger), you successfully blew my mind. Each branch felt unique, the stories often made me feel things I wasn't prepared to feel, and once again you have inspired me with your story. Thank you for putting so much work and love into these. by Salamislim on Feb 8, 2018
mizal	Jul 26, 2017	Nine people have rated this. Nine. In five years. Somehow I get the feeling Rogues is never getting copied over to this sad old graveyard, no matter how many fond memories you have of desecrating corpses here... by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
mizal	Jul 26, 2017	by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
admiralz	Oct 7, 2016	Absolutely brilliant. by admiralz on Oct 7, 2016
jackhammer40k	Feb 23, 2015	Holy crap dude that was so good. I got up to the year 101 and holy crap, i love it but feel kinda sad for the character you where playing but i loved it and hopefully you could make another one like this you are so good at these. by jackhammer40k on Feb 23, 2015
killuasilver	Oct 15, 2014	Another Great Bloody story but the Twisted mind of The End Master All i can say is this is another AWesome story. End Master i hope you keep writing because this stuff is REALLY good. by killuasilver on Oct 15, 2014
Madbrad200	May 21, 2014	Absolutely bloody amazing story. It was so good, that I feel sad having to end it. There were some grammatical errors throughout and i felt as if most of the choices led to my dead. But the story was amazing and it didn't matter what i felt about the choices as the story was so good. End Master certainly has a strange mind, one could say twisted, but he is a brilliant writer. by Madbrad200 on May 21, 2014
jcury	May 15, 2014	fan of your work man. You are awesome and this story is awesome. But I would say your true genius is in that twisted mind of yours. by jcury on May 15, 2014
Keter	Sep 5, 2012	by Keter on Sep 5, 2012
Zac6251	Oct 14, 2011	by Zac6251 on Oct 14, 2011
Locke	Oct 10, 2011	by Locke on Oct 10, 2011

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