Eternal

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Author Rating Date Comment
TurnipBandit
TurnipBandit
Nov 22, 2019
by TurnipBandit on Nov 22, 2019
C11302
C11302
Nov 21, 2019
by C11302 on Nov 21, 2019
C6H8O6
C6H8O6
Nov 21, 2019
If only I could rate this higher than a 10. Just read it. You won’t regret even a second.
by C6H8O6 on Nov 21, 2019
TheChef
TheChef
Nov 21, 2019
by TheChef on Nov 21, 2019
poisonmara
poisonmara
Nov 19, 2019
by poisonmara on Nov 19, 2019
venyanwarrior
venyanwarrior
Nov 19, 2019
by venyanwarrior on Nov 19, 2019
ninjapitka
ninjapitka
Oct 24, 2019
by ninjapitka on Oct 24, 2019
Cricket
Cricket
Aug 27, 2019
by Cricket on Aug 27, 2019
Salamislim
Salamislim
Feb 8, 2018
Endmaster, I've been a fan of your stories for a long time now, and when I came back to this site on a whim to see if there was anything new, imagine my surprise when I saw you made an entirely new story with no loose ends YEARS ago. Necromancer was a huge influence on me, and I have to say Eternal definitely lives up to it. I kept going back and forth to get different endings... but when I got to ending 13 (Harbinger), you successfully blew my mind. Each branch felt unique, the stories often made me feel things I wasn't prepared to feel, and once again you have inspired me with your story. Thank you for putting so much work and love into these.
by Salamislim on Feb 8, 2018
mizal
mizal
Jul 26, 2017
Nine people have rated this. Nine.

In five years.

Somehow I get the feeling Rogues is never getting copied over to this sad old graveyard, no matter how many fond memories you have of desecrating corpses here...
by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
mizal
mizal
Jul 26, 2017
by mizal on Jul 26, 2017
admiralz
admiralz
Oct 7, 2016
Absolutely brilliant.
by admiralz on Oct 7, 2016
jackhammer40k
jackhammer40k
Feb 23, 2015
Holy crap dude that was so good. I got up to the year 101 and holy crap, i love it but feel kinda sad for the character you where playing but i loved it and hopefully you could make another one like this you are so good at these.
by jackhammer40k on Feb 23, 2015
killuasilver
killuasilver
Oct 15, 2014
Another Great Bloody story but the Twisted mind of The End Master All i can say is this is another AWesome story. End Master i hope you keep writing because this stuff is REALLY good.
by killuasilver on Oct 15, 2014
Madbrad200
Madbrad200
May 21, 2014
Absolutely bloody amazing story. It was so good, that I feel sad having to end it. There were some grammatical errors throughout and i felt as if most of the choices led to my dead. But the story was amazing and it didn't matter what i felt about the choices as the story was so good. End Master certainly has a strange mind, one could say twisted, but he is a brilliant writer.
by Madbrad200 on May 21, 2014
jcury
jcury
May 15, 2014
fan of your work man. You are awesome and this story is awesome. But I would say your true genius is in that twisted mind of yours.
by jcury on May 15, 2014
Keter
Keter
Sep 5, 2012
by Keter on Sep 5, 2012
Zac6251
Zac6251
Oct 14, 2011
by Zac6251 on Oct 14, 2011
Locke
Locke
Oct 10, 2011
by Locke on Oct 10, 2011

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