d and d have a cool adventure

Written by dachande / MA: Mature Audiences - Adult / 7.33 (3 ratings) (3)
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donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Oct 7, 2011
Well I can certainly see why this was rated so high. You two must know each other.

Terribly written. I assume you're not going for anything fantastic and that this is little more than a shits and giggles story so I won't go too in depth.

But a ten it is not. Hell, it's barely a 2. Poor spelling, grammar, lack of plot, and mostly uninteresting. You got a 2 rather than a 1 because I enjoyed the far-too-brief description of the waitresses butt.
by donteatpoop on Oct 7, 2011
dachande
dachande		 Oct 1, 2011
the best fuckin ting
by dachande on Oct 1, 2011
DrDean
DrDean		 Oct 1, 2011
best
by DrDean on Oct 1, 2011

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