Comments & Ratings
Well I can certainly see why this was rated so high. You two must know each other.|
Terribly written. I assume you're not going for anything fantastic and that this is little more than a shits and giggles story so I won't go too in depth.
But a ten it is not. Hell, it's barely a 2. Poor spelling, grammar, lack of plot, and mostly uninteresting. You got a 2 rather than a 1 because I enjoyed the far-too-brief description of the waitresses butt.
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