The World of War

Written by retlin / NR: Not Rated / 6.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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apotheosis
apotheosis		 Aug 10, 2006
I really like the idea of a story focused around battle field strategy, I would have liked to see more done with it though. Some longer descriptions and more rooms would have been nice.
by apotheosis on Aug 10, 2006
Karold
Karold		 Nov 20, 2004
Not a bad story but all of the roots aren't ummm... 'exactly' the same length.
by Karold on Nov 20, 2004
NCPolice55571
NCPolice55571		 Oct 16, 2004
It's a simple story with a simple storyline. I'd like to have read more of a lead into the attack. Right after the 1st page your thrown into sudden war. don't know what led up to the war I just found myself fighting in it. A little more detail would help.
by NCPolice55571 on Oct 16, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Oct 15, 2004
A good story with occasional elementary writing style.
by jeffisthebest on Oct 15, 2004

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