The Oddball Odyssey Part Choose-Your-Own

Written by Gorloche / NR: Not Rated / 4.33 (12 ratings) (12)
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TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Jun 24, 2011
Yeah...For some strange reason I went on a rampage and wrote 10 rooms...It's an average story, with a good number of Contributors. It's also good to have a 'story,' considering that people can just screw around with it, and experiment, so, I suppose I might aswell give this a 5, for good measures, the plot isn't too bad, nor is the writing. Compared to Leah1597's writing skills..This is perhaps a Masterpiece haha.

I might've even given it a 6 if it had a little detail which is actually essential to creating a story, and perhaps a coherent plot. But hey. It's fine.
by TheCandyMan on Jun 24, 2011
coolguy
coolguy		 May 10, 2009
I wasn't too interested in it.
by coolguy on May 10, 2009
laco
laco		 Feb 5, 2009
its alright
by laco on Feb 5, 2009
Ghizzard
Ghizzard		 May 30, 2008
Not funny
by Ghizzard on May 30, 2008
hep0005
hep0005		 Feb 5, 2008
by hep0005 on Feb 5, 2008
apotheosis
apotheosis		 Jun 27, 2007
I think I could only enjoy this story if some substance was inhibiting my brain.
by apotheosis on Jun 27, 2007
Leblanc4prez
Leblanc4prez		 May 29, 2007
I love dwarves!
by Leblanc4prez on May 29, 2007
Dan2
Dan2		 May 28, 2007
Average story for people to goof around in.
by Dan2 on May 28, 2007
Usoki
Usoki		 Jul 6, 2006
Did you even put effort into this? Or is this just a written account of the first thing that came to mind?

It wasn't horrible, but its current rating is definetly way too high. I'm just counter-balancing this "story".
by Usoki on Jul 6, 2006
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt		 Aug 15, 2005
Stupid, stupid blather... (That's a 1.) but the idea of a baton-passing story was interesting and original... (Up to an 8.) but it had spelling errors... (Down to a 7.) and the rooms were too short... (Down to a 5.)

...and let's not forget it was REALLY stupid. (Sorry, a 3.)
by michaelrayholt on Aug 15, 2005
retlin
retlin		 Nov 19, 2004
Good story.(If you read this delete the room I added, it wasnt supposed to be the way it was. One of my friends screwed iot up.)
by retlin on Nov 19, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Oct 24, 2004
I have no idea why I enjoyed this story so much. Almost nothing was wrotten on each room but it was awesome!
by jeffisthebest on Oct 24, 2004

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