nothingness
Comments & Ratings
| Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
|---|---|---|---|
| apotheosis |
Sep 18, 2006 | I can see this was an attempt at a sort of unique abstract story concept but it lacked in content, grammar, and overall effort. Try a bit harder and add a bit more next time. Also, I completely agree with what Jeff said. | |
| jeffisthebest |
Oct 26, 2004 | You tell everyone else not to add anything dumb, yet all you add is dumb stuff. | |
| Karold |
Oct 4, 2004 | Excellent Story :) |