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Ok, so it has a coherent plotline, good grammar, spelling to my satisfaction. But I believe you should develop your vocabulary, and present some description. I have distaste..As apoth has said, for your writing style, as I said above. Develop, grow, and nurture your writing...Like a little seed in dry, undernourished soil. |
You get mah drift?
|Your writing style is grating, it is the mental equivalent of nails on a chalk board. Suffice to say, I am not impressed.|
|so-so at best.|