Awakening of The Hanyou

Written by crushonsess / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
TheCandyMan	Jul 27, 2011	Ok, so it has a coherent plotline, good grammar, spelling to my satisfaction. But I believe you should develop your vocabulary, and present some description. I have distaste..As apoth has said, for your writing style, as I said above. Develop, grow, and nurture your writing...Like a little seed in dry, undernourished soil. You get mah drift? by TheCandyMan on Jul 27, 2011
apotheosis	Feb 12, 2007	Your writing style is grating, it is the mental equivalent of nails on a chalk board. Suffice to say, I am not impressed. by apotheosis on Feb 12, 2007
jeffisthebest	Nov 10, 2004	so-so at best. by jeffisthebest on Nov 10, 2004
crushonsess	Aug 28, 2004	by crushonsess on Aug 28, 2004