Awakening of The Hanyou

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Ok, so it has a coherent plotline, good grammar, spelling to my satisfaction. But I believe you should develop your vocabulary, and present some description. I have distaste..As apoth has said, for your writing style, as I said above. Develop, grow, and nurture your writing...Like a little seed in dry, undernourished soil.

You get mah drift?
by TheCandyMan on Jul 27, 2011
Your writing style is grating, it is the mental equivalent of nails on a chalk board. Suffice to say, I am not impressed.
by apotheosis on Feb 12, 2007
so-so at best.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 10, 2004
by crushonsess on Aug 28, 2004

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