World War II

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
Creeper909	Mar 20, 2015	Oh come ON. You really need to put more thought and effort into it. by Creeper909 on Mar 20, 2015
Storywriter	Nov 4, 2009	Lousy drivel. by Storywriter on Nov 4, 2009
Jargner	Jun 8, 2007	by Jargner on Jun 8, 2007
vegabond213	Feb 2, 2007	by vegabond213 on Feb 2, 2007
apotheosis	Dec 4, 2006	More effort! Better descriptions would make it more coherent, a smoother plot would be nice and more of a plot as well. Finishing it would also help. Needs work. by apotheosis on Dec 4, 2006
writer22	Oct 30, 2006	I had no idea this story was based on a game untill i read the ratings. some of the choises dont make sence and the plot was very chopy. this needs alot of work. by writer22 on Oct 30, 2006
ouijapen	Jun 5, 2006	Unrealistic historical fiction. Not entertaining. by ouijapen on Jun 5, 2006
Jason5550123	Mar 25, 2006	Dude, come up with your own ideas, no offeense. by Jason5550123 on Mar 25, 2006
YazZMaN	Nov 2, 2005	I'm not going to lie to you, this story was f*cking terrible. I'm not sure if you made it bad purposely or just because you are new to writing/very young so I'll give you a five for assuming you tried somewhat. by YazZMaN on Nov 2, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby	Jul 21, 2005	I'm gonna have to go with homer on this one. Pretty lame premise, my friend. WW2 is a rich enough backdrop for a story, why base it off a stupid game? I mean, maybe the game's not stupid - but this story sure is. by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 21, 2005
jeffisthebest	Nov 10, 2004	Yeah like were going to play the game to read your story. by jeffisthebest on Nov 10, 2004

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