UR NAME IS KORO
Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Koroforo |
Sep 21, 2020 | So after rediscovering this story that I wrote in maybe just one night when I was 16 and then totally forgot about was ACTUALLY incredible... I send an email to the admins of this site to ask if I could have access to my old story so I could finally have the chance to expand on it. It's hilarious to see all the bad reviews from over the years and totally agree I left it with LOTS of holes at the time.... but back then when I created it I'm pretty sure you couldn't even actually link to pages you wanted, you just had to make new options each time... as far as I remember.... so hence all the dead ends (it was SEVENTEEN YEARS AGO THAT I WROTE THIS). Pretty incredible to find this story still here and to get the chance to finally tie up some loose ends and let my imagination run wild filling in the gaps. | |
TheCandyMan |
May 15, 2011 | What apotheosis said..seriously though, if you want to make a story, it needs to be attractive and actually have a true plot, it's unique in its own ways, but could use a lot of work. | |
Crimmy |
Aug 12, 2009 | ||
MegaProto |
Dec 9, 2007 | Worst story ever. | |
metalcrisis |
Feb 8, 2007 | Learn to spell. PLEASE! | |
Dan2 |
Oct 8, 2006 | ...Creative? | |
apotheosis |
Sep 21, 2006 | It is my belief that for a story to be good there are two factors that play a major role. One is quantity and the other is quality. You simply multiply the two together and you get the overall value of the story. Your quantity was lacking and your quality was approaching a limit of 0. Still I saw reference to murdering babies so I'll give a 2 instead of a 1. | |
ChubbyTeletubby |
Jul 5, 2005 | If you're too damn lazy to even spell the word 'You're' in the title, then go fall in a ditch and die. Well, maybe you don't need to die - but fall in a ditch! And stay there for awhile. | |
Rpgxper |
Jul 18, 2004 | This story is interesting, but it could use a little work. Perhaps redoing the entire story, and including an actual plot will make it more fun and engaging. A little organizing and touching up would really pay off. Keep up the good work and give us more to expect in the future. ;) |