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UR NAME IS KORO

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Koroforo
Koroforo
Sep 21, 2020
So after rediscovering this story that I wrote in maybe just one night when I was 16 and then totally forgot about was ACTUALLY incredible... I send an email to the admins of this site to ask if I could have access to my old story so I could finally have the chance to expand on it. It's hilarious to see all the bad reviews from over the years and totally agree I left it with LOTS of holes at the time.... but back then when I created it I'm pretty sure you couldn't even actually link to pages you wanted, you just had to make new options each time... as far as I remember.... so hence all the dead ends (it was SEVENTEEN YEARS AGO THAT I WROTE THIS). Pretty incredible to find this story still here and to get the chance to finally tie up some loose ends and let my imagination run wild filling in the gaps.
by Koroforo on Sep 21, 2020
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan
May 15, 2011
What apotheosis said..seriously though, if you want to make a story, it needs to be attractive and actually have a true plot, it's unique in its own ways, but could use a lot of work.
by TheCandyMan on May 15, 2011
Crimmy
Crimmy
Aug 12, 2009
by Crimmy on Aug 12, 2009
MegaProto
MegaProto
Dec 9, 2007
Worst story ever.
by MegaProto on Dec 9, 2007
metalcrisis
metalcrisis
Feb 8, 2007
Learn to spell. PLEASE!
by metalcrisis on Feb 8, 2007
Dan2
Dan2
Oct 8, 2006
...Creative?
by Dan2 on Oct 8, 2006
apotheosis
apotheosis
Sep 21, 2006
It is my belief that for a story to be good there are two factors that play a major role. One is quantity and the other is quality. You simply multiply the two together and you get the overall value of the story. Your quantity was lacking and your quality was approaching a limit of 0. Still I saw reference to murdering babies so I'll give a 2 instead of a 1.
by apotheosis on Sep 21, 2006
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby
Jul 5, 2005
If you're too damn lazy to even spell the word 'You're' in the title, then go fall in a ditch and die. Well, maybe you don't need to die - but fall in a ditch! And stay there for awhile.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Jul 5, 2005
Rpgxper
Rpgxper
Jul 18, 2004
This story is interesting, but it could use a little work. Perhaps redoing the entire story, and including an actual plot will make it more fun and engaging. A little organizing and touching up would really pay off. Keep up the good work and give us more to expect in the future. ;)
by Rpgxper on Jul 18, 2004

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