The Jenn Frank SuperMegaAdventureFun Tour

Written by mondo / NR: Not Rated / 3.25 (4 ratings) (4)
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YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Dec 12, 2009
The think I don't get about this is that the author seems intelligent. There's few grammatical errors and the story seems intricate in some vague way.

In the end, it simply wasn't coherent enough, and thus falls apart.
by YazZMaN on Dec 12, 2009
VodkaLemon
VodkaLemon		 Sep 22, 2005
Needs Work
by VodkaLemon on Sep 22, 2005
ChubbyTeletubby
ChubbyTeletubby		 Mar 10, 2005
Bad stuff.
by ChubbyTeletubby on Mar 10, 2005
dizzystar
dizzystar		 Sep 22, 2004
started well, but the ending was lame
by dizzystar on Sep 22, 2004

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