The neverending story

Written by WarlordRak / NR: Not Rated / 6.80 (5 ratings) (5)
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RishiAmador
RishiAmador		 Nov 7, 2014
I'd really like it if this story had a little less loose ends.
by RishiAmador on Nov 7, 2014
Lackofmop
Lackofmop		 Jul 5, 2013
Hilarious... I was laughing the whole way through...
by Lackofmop on Jul 5, 2013
TheCandyMan
TheCandyMan		 Aug 29, 2011
You have a whole load of improvement to work one. Yet, I found a new way to experiment with new ways of writing. It is also clear you have a good number of contributors. Including me - who has written more than the creator of this...'Story.' There's not much to it..Really, but then, that's what's given you these points, as there's nothing to it, there is nothing to rate. There's nothing that can be said about it..No constructive criticism, nothing...So...Here's a seven - Congratulations.
by TheCandyMan on Aug 29, 2011
YazZMaN
YazZMaN		 Nov 18, 2005
The writing could have been better, the rooms could of been longer, and the pages could have been more quantiful but something about this story made me like it. And how much you enjoy the story is what ratings were meant for in the first place, were they not?
by YazZMaN on Nov 18, 2005
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Nov 5, 2004
I liked it and the amount of rooms was satisfying. Good job.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004

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