Comments & Ratings
|Definitely doesn't deserve its extremely high ratings, but still a good story.|
Pretty well written and the author seems as though he/she was serious about it... last YEAR. Unfortunately, just another example of a reader/writer that was only here for a few months.|
Also, the "This room under construction!" endings were inane, seeing as how the I-S engine already allows for when a choice has no room behind it.
|Outstanding! Simply one of the best that are out there. Storyline dialogue and scene description is great. I can visualise everything that is happening and this story will emerse the reader capturing their full attention. It's a great read.|
|i Love this story! can you please continue it! Please!|