Hiei Part 1

Written by Venus2352 / PG: Parental Guidance Suggested / 8.00 (8 ratings) (8)
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kirara
kirara		 Feb 25, 2009
by kirara on Feb 25, 2009
jp33
jp33		 Apr 12, 2006
by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
Tia
Tia		 Apr 5, 2006
I read half & it's alright.
by Tia on Apr 5, 2006
donteatpoop
donteatpoop		 Sep 13, 2005
It seems to me that though you can write, and have the ability to create intriguing storylines and interesting characters; you refuse to do something as simple as seperating your paragraphs. Without seperation of paragraphs, the text is garbled and confusing; not to mention <b>extremely</b> irritating.
by donteatpoop on Sep 13, 2005
LadyLeaMarie
LadyLeaMarie		 Jan 14, 2005
I liked it! You did a great job on it.
by LadyLeaMarie on Jan 14, 2005
ShadowedVixen
ShadowedVixen		 Jan 1, 2005
*.* THis is awsome!!!! *huggles hiei plushie*
by ShadowedVixen on Jan 1, 2005
CrystalQueen16
CrystalQueen16		 Nov 17, 2004
I love this fic!!
by CrystalQueen16 on Nov 17, 2004
jeffisthebest
jeffisthebest		 Nov 5, 2004
It would get a higher rating if you separated the paragraphs, it looks like a jumbled bunch of garbage, but the story is good.
by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004

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