Hiei Part 1

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
kirara	Feb 25, 2009	by kirara on Feb 25, 2009
jp33	Apr 12, 2006	by jp33 on Apr 12, 2006
Tia	Apr 5, 2006	I read half & it's alright. by Tia on Apr 5, 2006
donteatpoop	Sep 13, 2005	It seems to me that though you can write, and have the ability to create intriguing storylines and interesting characters; you refuse to do something as simple as seperating your paragraphs. Without seperation of paragraphs, the text is garbled and confusing; not to mention <b>extremely</b> irritating. by donteatpoop on Sep 13, 2005
LadyLeaMarie	Jan 14, 2005	I liked it! You did a great job on it. by LadyLeaMarie on Jan 14, 2005
ShadowedVixen	Jan 1, 2005	. THis is awsome!!!! huggles hiei plushie by ShadowedVixen on Jan 1, 2005
CrystalQueen16	Nov 17, 2004	I love this fic!! by CrystalQueen16 on Nov 17, 2004
jeffisthebest	Nov 5, 2004	It would get a higher rating if you separated the paragraphs, it looks like a jumbled bunch of garbage, but the story is good. by jeffisthebest on Nov 5, 2004