Comments & Ratings
Author | Rating | Date | Comment |
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Reads more like an outline than a story; has potential IF ghahn tries to leave his sexism and homophobia out of his public work. | |||
More work and effort could've raised this stories rating substantially. It had 6-8 potential if you actually put in more work. | |||
This story wasn't very good, but comparitively speaking, it is far better than a one or two. It has a lot of problems, but the rooms ususally contain more than one sentence... which is usually where I throw the ones in. | |||
Killing people with paper clips?! What Am I rambo, poo off. | |||
This story sucked |