Comments & Ratings
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||Aug 28, 2006|
||Aug 7, 2005||
It may just be that I don't like military-type stories. God knows I hated my six years in.|
But I also really can't get over the fact that you don't bother at all with your spelling - the stories would be so high quality if you did. This would be akin (most likely) to the irritation you'd feel if I misaligned a sight you'd worked long and hard to have bulls-eye accurate, or if I took your favorite knife and sharpened it with a file instead of a stone. That would probably bug the shit out of you. PLEASE, NCPolice - something tells me you're better than this. Prove me right.
||Jan 21, 2005||very good story. I enjoyed it very much.|
||Nov 28, 2004||Very good story.|
||Oct 14, 2004||
Its good, but in one of the choices "take out the machine gunner first" or whatever, you make it so the reader take out the radio person first. You should actually kill the machine gunner first I think. |
Also, I liked your knowledge of the sniper and how you used the terms.