Sniper: One Shot, One Kill!

Written by NCPolice55571 / NR: Not Rated /

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Comments & Ratings

Author	Date	Comment
braadr	Apr 19, 2022	good so far but wished there was more to read by braadr on Apr 19, 2022
dfalan	Nov 11, 2008	by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Chickenman	Aug 28, 2006	by Chickenman on Aug 28, 2006
michaelrayholt	Aug 7, 2005	It may just be that I don't like military-type stories. God knows I hated my six years in. But I also really can't get over the fact that you don't bother at all with your spelling - the stories would be so high quality if you did. This would be akin (most likely) to the irritation you'd feel if I misaligned a sight you'd worked long and hard to have bulls-eye accurate, or if I took your favorite knife and sharpened it with a file instead of a stone. That would probably bug the shit out of you. PLEASE, NCPolice - something tells me you're better than this. Prove me right. by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
Slinky	Jan 21, 2005	very good story. I enjoyed it very much. by Slinky on Jan 21, 2005
Ratty17	Nov 28, 2004	Very good story. by Ratty17 on Nov 28, 2004
retlin	Oct 14, 2004	Its good, but in one of the choices "take out the machine gunner first" or whatever, you make it so the reader take out the radio person first. You should actually kill the machine gunner first I think. Also, I liked your knowledge of the sniper and how you used the terms. by retlin on Oct 14, 2004