Sniper: One Shot, One Kill!

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dfalan
dfalan
Nov 11, 2008
by dfalan on Nov 11, 2008
Chickenman
Chickenman
Aug 28, 2006
by Chickenman on Aug 28, 2006
michaelrayholt
michaelrayholt
Aug 7, 2005
It may just be that I don't like military-type stories. God knows I hated my six years in.

But I also really can't get over the fact that you don't bother at all with your spelling - the stories would be so high quality if you did. This would be akin (most likely) to the irritation you'd feel if I misaligned a sight you'd worked long and hard to have bulls-eye accurate, or if I took your favorite knife and sharpened it with a file instead of a stone. That would probably bug the shit out of you. PLEASE, NCPolice - something tells me you're better than this. Prove me right.
by michaelrayholt on Aug 7, 2005
Slinky
Slinky
Jan 21, 2005
very good story. I enjoyed it very much.
by Slinky on Jan 21, 2005
Ratty17
Ratty17
Nov 28, 2004
Very good story.
by Ratty17 on Nov 28, 2004
retlin
retlin
Oct 14, 2004
Its good, but in one of the choices "take out the machine gunner first" or whatever, you make it so the reader take out the radio person first. You should actually kill the machine gunner first I think.
Also, I liked your knowledge of the sniper and how you used the terms.
by retlin on Oct 14, 2004

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